Sliddy Sliding Doors

To the teachers 

Hi, I am Brooke.k and I strongly believe that we should have Sliding Doors in the classroom because it will help our learning we can have a big space and a small space and it will be more quite. Don’t you think that we should have sliding doors in the classroom?  

My first reason is that it will help our learning because it will block the other groups off so everybody can get their work done faster. I find that I get more work done when there are not lots of people walking in and out of other classrooms that they're not meant to be in and they also talk to people when they are not meant to be.  

My second reason is that we can have a big space and a small space because of the sliding doors. This would work because when we want a big space we can open up the sliding doors. When we want a little space we can then shut the doors. This means we can move around and be in other places but we still have the hub. So we still know that it is a hub for years 5 and 6.

My third reason is that it will be quieter because it will have soundproof sliding doors and again you can get your work done faster. It will be quieter which means that we can focus more on our work. I also find that I get more work done when it is quite.  

In conclusion that is why I think that we should have sliding doors because it will help your learning, it will be quieter and we have a big space and a small space. I hope I changed your mind so by now you should have your mind changed that we should have sliding doors in the classroom.  

     

This week for my writing I have been writing persuasive writing, to try and make you see what I am thinking and how it can help you as the reader of my writing.

I have written an introduction, 3 points on my topic and a conclusion.