Hello bloggers, and welcome back to my blog. This week in Mr.Sutherland's literacy group we got to choose one of the four topics to write for or against. I chose why we should wear mufti clothes to school. Unfortunately I didn't write that much but I think my paragraphs are pretty good. If I have any mistakes in my writing please tell me in the comments.
Friday, August 21, 2020
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Hey Brooke it's Sophie!
ReplyDeleteI've never commented on your blog but I have been reading your posts and you have worded them very well, they are very interesting. I totally agree we should be allowed to wear mufti to school. You have clearly stated your reasons, great job. Perhaps next be careful with your words and their meanings like fear and fair. Overall good work! Can't wait for you to come to Toroa next year!
Soph :D
Hi Brooke, what you're doing in literacy sounds very interesting!
ReplyDeleteUnfortunately I can't view your slide becuase for some reason I can only see the top half.
Good job! Bye.