Hello bloggers and welcome to my blog this week in Mr. Sutherland's literacy group we had to use Dadweavers and you will find out what Dadweavers stands for in the link at the top of my slide (sorry the link doesn't work). First, we planned our story then we had to Draft/write our story about the space station, next we fixed up all of the mistakes and made some parts of the story better. Finally, we had to publish our story like putting a background in and changing the font and the colours of the text. Do you want to go to space? When I did this I felt fine.
Sunday, June 14, 2020
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So glad to see you post this up on the weekend you are awesome
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Brooke, I really like how detailed you made your writing, it was very interseting to read. Maybe next time you could double check your spelling, other than that great job!
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Kia Ora Brooke,I love the how much description you have in your writing, I also like how you have an before and after, Maybe next time you could set it out better, say like moving the writing so we can see the astronauts. Other that that I think you did a great job, keep it up :) Thanks your favourite sister, Jess :)
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